Nice work. As Mira said it’s a little sad, reminding me of when i often preferred the comfort and simplicity of frequent travel over the chaos of home.
OK I have to say that I did not notice there was anything even slightly prurient —I was such an unattentive reader and overanxious commenter. If you play at Lytton Plaza, Palo Alto, you’ll have to do any wardrobe changes in the public women’s room of the pizza parlor.
Thank you Rachel. Isn't it how funny how loneliness can demand of us even more time alone?
really powerful poem Rachel..
Cool.
Beans.
Cold coffee.
Too much gabbing for a Sunday morning approaching the afternoon I mean me not you thank you for sharing
Nice work. As Mira said it’s a little sad, reminding me of when i often preferred the comfort and simplicity of frequent travel over the chaos of home.
Lovely, poignant and a little sad like a good poem often is ❤️
OK I have to say that I did not notice there was anything even slightly prurient —I was such an unattentive reader and overanxious commenter. If you play at Lytton Plaza, Palo Alto, you’ll have to do any wardrobe changes in the public women’s room of the pizza parlor.